with sartik

[27/01, 7:07 am] Dwit David Philip: How did you take it
Here writing poem is, sexually active on his lover but the counter part is inactive

Then the the activity are writing poetry

poet could persuade his counter part to be active active poetry writer 

The counter part stated

Then both wrote poem together actively and got sweat 

Then the poet appealing to rest. 
May be counter part still writing when both are already tired and sweating
[27/01, 7:52 am] Dwit David Philip: Your response compelled me to write again 

 Midnight poem
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Midnight poem
Expecting me to write again and again
Crafted with passion and dented again and again
Still expecting to go on
Reading is easy instead of into composition 
Enough is enough "you better write what you have known"

Midnight poem 
Scribbling started that is unknown 
Saw the passion, but rubbing the mistakes again and again
Still expecting to know how do I respond,
Reading is easy instead of into composition
Enough is enough "you are better writing than what I have known"

Midnight poem 
Together writen !
Each other's mistakes mended and dented with utmost satisfaction 
Response met and witnessed each other's passion  
Both reading and writing as if easy salvation 
Finally declared together "that's the poem to our best satisfaction"

Midnight poem together writen 
It's our kids we love

DWIT DAVID PHILIP 
Advocate and social worker 
Bhawanipatna, Kalahandi 
9437104303

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